The Darkness from Within
Part 2
He closed his eyes.... then he felt an almighty lurch and an almighty scream and opened them again. He looked back down. The hole was breaking off chunks of the "fabric" now and weird things were happening. Hot angry light stung his face and the rock was literally warping! Anjie was screaming her head off while Vince was slowly sinking. Cloud was gone. One of his friends were gone. That must had been who screamed.
He tried to appreciate the surrounds, but there were none. He couldn't see the mountain or even the ground! Everything seemed to be floating mid-air rocking violently. Vince was now at the edge of the hole. He quickly pulled out his blade and attempted to get him to hang on. But the blade just seemed to wave like a badly tuned television. It began to wax and wane then began to heat up! Soon it was hotter than he could stand, it was literally oozing away. "Bye" he said to his wife (Anjie) before plummeting down into the hole. Anjie was hysterical. He wanted to help but he hardly knew what to do.
He had come up with some words of comfort but then he began sinking himself! Lower and lower he went revolving away from the known universe. Now Anjie was beside herself. He had hardly heard anything louder. "See you on the other side," he heard himself say. The rock then vaporised leaving nothing but a purple cloud behind...
Part 2
He closed his eyes.... then he felt an almighty lurch and an almighty scream and opened them again. He looked back down. The hole was breaking off chunks of the "fabric" now and weird things were happening. Hot angry light stung his face and the rock was literally warping! Anjie was screaming her head off while Vince was slowly sinking. Cloud was gone. One of his friends were gone. That must had been who screamed.
He tried to appreciate the surrounds, but there were none. He couldn't see the mountain or even the ground! Everything seemed to be floating mid-air rocking violently. Vince was now at the edge of the hole. He quickly pulled out his blade and attempted to get him to hang on. But the blade just seemed to wave like a badly tuned television. It began to wax and wane then began to heat up! Soon it was hotter than he could stand, it was literally oozing away. "Bye" he said to his wife (Anjie) before plummeting down into the hole. Anjie was hysterical. He wanted to help but he hardly knew what to do.
He had come up with some words of comfort but then he began sinking himself! Lower and lower he went revolving away from the known universe. Now Anjie was beside herself. He had hardly heard anything louder. "See you on the other side," he heard himself say. The rock then vaporised leaving nothing but a purple cloud behind...
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